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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: -вєнιη∂ тнє мυѕι¢-
« on: October 07, 2012, 07:37:03 pm »
I don't see anything wrong with it c: Approved <3
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Search For Love / Re: old man's folly -- open!
« on: October 02, 2012, 09:30:51 pm »
I think it'd work better if they had the same mother.
What I have in mind-- Warcry's father died for various unknown reasons before his mother died too, but before his mother died, she was r.ped by a loner and ended up with a second litter of kits. After she had the kits in Riverclan, she too also died for various unknown reasons.
This will make her have siblings though, whatever you wish to do with them is completely up to you :3
What I have in mind-- Warcry's father died for various unknown reasons before his mother died too, but before his mother died, she was r.ped by a loner and ended up with a second litter of kits. After she had the kits in Riverclan, she too also died for various unknown reasons.
This will make her have siblings though, whatever you wish to do with them is completely up to you :3
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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: freepaw ;; windclan ;; finished
« on: October 02, 2012, 09:25:35 pm »
If it is for styling reasons, then I guess the app is fine though i'm completely not sure. I'm going to let higher staff go ahead and grade this--
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Search For Love / Re: old man's folly -- open!
« on: October 02, 2012, 09:22:06 pm »
Warcry has quite a large family, there are cats he is related to yet doesn't even know it. His parents are dead along with his siblings, besides Livelypaw/Livelyfox who'll be returning to their clan. Despite this, he has multiple relationships with a lot of cats.
They could be cousins or even half siblings if you want. :3
They could be cousins or even half siblings if you want. :3
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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: freepaw ;; windclan ;; finished
« on: October 02, 2012, 09:17:40 pm »
It all looks great, but there are multiple capitalization errors.
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Welcoming Den / Re: GONE FOR THE WEEKEND ?!
« on: September 29, 2012, 05:44:30 am »
Can't wait for both, your return and the two gatherings <3
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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: fell into w o n d e r l a n d ]
« on: September 29, 2012, 04:27:59 am »Approved.
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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
« on: September 28, 2012, 08:22:23 pm »
Well, I wanted to know because I questioned some realism within the history..
Approved.
Approved.
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Create Your Warrior - Advanced / Re: a little voice in the wind- indigopaw of windclan
« on: September 28, 2012, 05:40:34 pm »
First time doing this, higher staff can correct me-
-How did he get his name? You mentioned that he had none at the lab.
-How did he find the clan? You left off the history with him being a loner.
-Out of the four clans, why was it that he choose Windclan instead of remaining a loner or joining a different clan?
-How did he survive as a loner until he found the clan? You stated he escaped from a lab meaning he would have no clue how to hunt, fight or find shelter because he wouldn't be able to learn that in a lab.
-How did he learn how to survive in the wild as a loner? Did someone teach him? If so, is there a name to this specific cat or any reason behind it?
-If he's from a lab, that'd mean he'd most likely escaped into a city, how did he find the forest? Why did he venture beyond the city?
I also believe that a little voice in his head would classify as Schizophrenia unless it's his thoughts and if it's his thoughts, I am fairly sure he'll have control over it.
-How did he get his name? You mentioned that he had none at the lab.
-How did he find the clan? You left off the history with him being a loner.
-Out of the four clans, why was it that he choose Windclan instead of remaining a loner or joining a different clan?
-How did he survive as a loner until he found the clan? You stated he escaped from a lab meaning he would have no clue how to hunt, fight or find shelter because he wouldn't be able to learn that in a lab.
-How did he learn how to survive in the wild as a loner? Did someone teach him? If so, is there a name to this specific cat or any reason behind it?
-If he's from a lab, that'd mean he'd most likely escaped into a city, how did he find the forest? Why did he venture beyond the city?
I also believe that a little voice in his head would classify as Schizophrenia unless it's his thoughts and if it's his thoughts, I am fairly sure he'll have control over it.
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Graphics and Art / Re: alligator sky || a graphics shoppe
« on: September 26, 2012, 09:50:13 pm »
Nope <3
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Graphics and Art / Re: alligator sky || a graphics shoppe
« on: September 26, 2012, 09:04:49 pm »
vizzybear, i want a text banner!
name;; Polarbear
text;; Your feeling stronger.
No more feeling bad.
colors;; Icy blue colors please?
other;; Make the bold text italics please?
name;; Polarbear
text;; Your feeling stronger.
No more feeling bad.
colors;; Icy blue colors please?
other;; Make the bold text italics please?
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Welcoming Den / Re: YO WASSUPPPP
« on: September 26, 2012, 08:50:41 pm »
Hi Lemmy c: Welcome to the site ^ ^
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The Lake / Re: care for some fun, anyone? [ open ]
« on: September 25, 2012, 10:39:51 pm »
[Vindclan XD That'll be stuck in my head all night.. Vindclan. Vindclan XD c:]
The tan-tawny colored tom kept his blue eyes on her as she head-butted his chest again. He was of course, larger then she was which is why it wasn't that effective. Polar, however, brought back some depressing memories and he soon fell silent except for a small, "Your velcome." Whcih was directed towards her thank you for saying he'd take care of the badger. Then a tom almost as large as he was, if not the same size, tumbled down the slope towards the group. The warrior said 'Hi' to one of the cats there before something was directed at him. "Yes, my name if Polarbear." He answered.
The tan-tawny colored tom kept his blue eyes on her as she head-butted his chest again. He was of course, larger then she was which is why it wasn't that effective. Polar, however, brought back some depressing memories and he soon fell silent except for a small, "Your velcome." Whcih was directed towards her thank you for saying he'd take care of the badger. Then a tom almost as large as he was, if not the same size, tumbled down the slope towards the group. The warrior said 'Hi' to one of the cats there before something was directed at him. "Yes, my name if Polarbear." He answered.
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The Lake / Re: care for some fun, anyone? [ open ]
« on: September 25, 2012, 10:11:18 pm »
Despite his scary appearance and the sense of dread hanging over him, they all were friendly to him. One even knew him. Turning to Angelpaw, he dipped his head in greeting. "Hi." He repeated with the same gentle facial expression. He then turned to Notepaw and dipped his head in greeting to the other apprentice before his head shifted to the noise of a splashing cat and his eyes soon rested on Showpaw. His attention was jerked to yet a different cat though, when he felt a cat run into his chest fur. He watched as the cat stumbled back and explained. "I'm sure one of my friends vill try to catch it and kill it if it comes by the Horse Place, if i'm there i'll probably help them. The horses may even stomp them." Polarbear stated in return, his 'th''s slightly shifted to a s or a z sound and his 'w' had already turned to a v sound as well. It was his Russian accent which might of been hard to understand. His gentle expression locked on her. "I'm Polarbear, a loner. I live at the Horse Place between Riverclan and Vindclan. Vhat are your names?" The tan-tawny tom spoke calmly, his Russian Accent still there.
[First time RPing a cat with a Russian Accent, trying my best. Sorry. :3]
[First time RPing a cat with a Russian Accent, trying my best. Sorry. :3]
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The Lake / Re: care for some fun, anyone? [ open ]
« on: September 25, 2012, 04:33:06 pm »
It was the activity of the two cats that drew this older tom closer to them and out of his home in the Horse Place which was nestled conveniently next to the lakes and between the borders of Riverclan and Windclan. His friends were sleeping which was the reason he had gone by himself to meet this two cats in the first place, already considering them friends like he considered everyone his friends.
The big-boned tom with woolly, thick short fur that made him suited for the winter was already bounding over to them. Not only was big-boned but he was also abnormally large. There would most easily be quite a size difference between him and the two.
Also carrying a gentle facial expression like he usually did, the sense of dread that hung over him once again, mistakenly intensified. Though the naive tan-tawny tom with a v-neck of white didn't know this, his blue eyes remained on the two apprentices as he kept bounding over to them before he finally got closer. "Hi there." Polarbear stated with a little bit of a friendly and curious tone, his Russian accent was there but none of the three cats knew what kind of accent it was called at all.
He barely even noticed the leader of one of the clans up ahead.
The big-boned tom with woolly, thick short fur that made him suited for the winter was already bounding over to them. Not only was big-boned but he was also abnormally large. There would most easily be quite a size difference between him and the two.
Also carrying a gentle facial expression like he usually did, the sense of dread that hung over him once again, mistakenly intensified. Though the naive tan-tawny tom with a v-neck of white didn't know this, his blue eyes remained on the two apprentices as he kept bounding over to them before he finally got closer. "Hi there." Polarbear stated with a little bit of a friendly and curious tone, his Russian accent was there but none of the three cats knew what kind of accent it was called at all.
He barely even noticed the leader of one of the clans up ahead.